A little boy walked to school
ready to face the day
just like the morning before
in his chest a heavy heart lay
His clothes were worn and tattered
ragged shoes upon his feet
he walked quietly through the door
and slowly took his seat
With all eyes upon him
the children snarled and grinned
it was the usual daily routine
each morning they started again
He was the black sheep of the class, he knew
because he was less fortunate to be
wearing new clothes and shiny shoes
for all their eyes to see
This day was a lot different though
he could feel it in his heart
he raised his hand to speak
it was tearing him apart
The teacher gave her permission
and he walked to the front of the class
ready to take on the world
each one looked as he passed
I know that you don't like me
my clothes are worn not new
you see my mom don't have the money
to buy things she needs and wants to
I haven't told my mom yet
because it would make her so sad
she works hard everyday to feed us
she's the best mom I could've ever had
My dad is not with us anymore
he lives very faraway
I can't see or touch him
but in my heart he'll forever stay
He died several years ago
while fighting in the war
and each day that he's gone
I miss him more and more
But heaven is his new home now
although he would've liked to stay
a little longer with us both
to watch me grow up and play
I talk to him everyday
and each night when I say my prayer
he tells me not to worry
that he'll always be there
He tells me to hold on
and he'll never leave my side
I know he's here with me now
I can feel him deep inside
He looked across the classroom
and saw tears in every eye
he said , don't be sad for me
someday we're all going to die
You see I'm not different than you
I just want to be your friend
my dad taught me to love everyone
now let's all start over again
Susie Swanson
This one was hard for me folks, it took alot out of me to say the least. I tried my very best to do it justice. When I started writing it I can honestly say I didn't know which direction I was going, but this is what it turned out to be.. Hope you Enjoy.. Blessings, Susie
Very moving poem, Susie. Reminds us to try walking a mile in someone else's shoes. I'm glad it had an uplifting ending.
ReplyDeleteOH My Heart, Susie... This is heart-wrenching... I did cry! That little boy shared some wisdom that all of us need to hear over and over... It's not just about a little boy who is different... It's about society --and how we all treat others who are different in my ways from us. Great message --and well-written. Now---let me get my hankie!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Betsy
Thank you Daisy, sadly that is happening more all the time, especially with children and I had to give it a happy ending..
ReplyDeleteThank you Betsy, that is so right. Society has fell by the wayside.. Chidren are smarter than their years now days. It has always hurt me to see a child made fun of by what they wear or just being differnt in some way. I remember that happening in school way to much..Thanks again to you both.
I believe God gave you the direction and the words and the compassionate heart to put this together. Good job and a great lesson for us all in the story. May God bless!
ReplyDeleteI was this child, only not as brave, so no happy ending, to tell you this is perfect Susie gives it no justice to how moving it is.
ReplyDeleteYou are so gifted !
Your hard work on this one paid off...
I have asked before and it has always been yes, so I'm guessing its ok for us to share this right...
Love you my sweet friend, thank you for being you !
JL&B
Hi Susie, what a heart stirring poem! I was bullied quite a lot when I was growing up and I can really understand the fear the child in the poem had, facing each morning with the uncertainty of not knowing how others were going to treat you that day. You really captured that feeling very powerfully. Thank you for your empathy Susie and your kind heart, you are a dear person! Delisa
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Randy. I have come to the conclusion that God had a hand in it as always. We can't do anything without him. So glad you enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteJl, I'm so sorry for what you had to go through. To a child there's not to many happy endings, but you came out on top. That may be the reason I wrote this, like I said God has a way of leading us in the right direction. Thank you my friend, you feel free to share it.
Delisa, like I told Jl, God is in control. I'm so sorry for the heartache you endured, but you made it and that's the best blessing of all.. Love you all and thanks again..
Touched the core of my heart.No words today!
ReplyDeleteAmazing!
Very moving Susie and a joy to read.
ReplyDeleteTake care.
Yvonne.
Thank you Monika and Yvonne..So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the visit..
ReplyDeleteSo touching Susie, well done ♥
ReplyDeleteVery touching - to the very end!
ReplyDeleteThank you Helena and Charlotte, so glad you enjoyed it..
ReplyDeleteHi Susie! Just thought I would stop by and say hi! :) I have been working hard doing laundry and folding clothes all morning. I also have been organizing my closet and putting away some of my summer clothes and thought I would take a little break. It sure is a pretty day and the temperature has cooled down again. I spent some time last night reading through your lovely book again. I will always treasure it! I keep it in my knitting basket right next to my chair.
ReplyDeleteWe took Barkley to the groomers and he looks so pretty. I was getting a little concerned because he was starting to look a bit chubby but after he came back and all the mounds of fluff were trimmed off, he looked like his normal self again! :) Tomorrow Tony is going to continue with his cooking lessons and we are going to make apple pie from scratch. Last week he made bread. He is getting really enthusiastic and ultimately it will sure be a big help to me. Well, I guess I better get back to work and finish my projects. Have a wonderful afternoon! Delisa :)
That poem really touched my heart, Susie, as my dad passed away over twenty years ago. He lives in my heart every day. Children are so special, and they truly do teach us things too.
ReplyDelete~Sheri at Red Rose Alley
Dearest Susie, Your poem touched deep inside my heart. I was teased and bullied by the kids in my school when I was young. My parents did not have a lot of money either. Many of my cloths were from goodwill. I was also terribly shy. I could go all day and not say a word till I got home from school. Kids would pick on me and bully me. For the most part I have outgrown my shyness. Sometimes though that timid girl comes back. Love your poems dear Susie. Thank you and God bless you always. xoxo
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