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Tuesday, October 11, 2011
The Old Barn
There's an old barn
sitting all silent and still
what a story it could tell
out there in that big, open field
Back when times were different
there were alot of things going on
to look at the old barn today
no one would never have known
It was very fond of the cows
that used to all gather in
when it came milking time
and the milk they were willing to lend
Oh those pesky chickens
they were always running around
looking to build their nests
for then they were homeward bound
It could never forget the horses
that each evening had to be fed
especially during the winter
before they were put to bed
Oh how it loved the children
when they used to come and play
up in that big, old hayloft
each and everyday
There the old rope is still hanging
they used to swing on that old thing
with all their child-like noise
what joy it did bring
The old barn surely did feel needed
in that other place and time
it seems so sad today
just to walk away and leave it behind
In my mind I'll hold on to the picture
when I walk through that big, old door
then it'll stay with me forever
and never be forgotten anymore
Susie Swanson Published, 2010
This is another oldie folks, one of my first poems. I've posted it in the past and several people that have my book has already read it but I have several new followers now and decided to post it again. Hope you enjoy, Blessings, Susie
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It's sad to see deserted old barns going to pot, Susie. It seems like such a waste.
ReplyDeleteNeat poem, Susie... I love barns ---and when I see one, I always wonder what went on at one time in that barn...
ReplyDeleteI will say that it is sad to see so many these days not being used...
Hugs
Betsy
Nice poem, Susie. Those old barns hold so many memories. :)
ReplyDeleteI love seeing big old barns, and am glad to have one at the end of the street where I live. What life, and stories, took place in those walls. They definitely speak so fondly of another era ...
ReplyDeleteSusie, this was the first time I read this poem and it was a lovely tribute. Thanks for the repost.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone, glad you liked it. I hate seeing old barns fall by the wayside. So much history. I love the old time things, but it seems they're almost gone now.. I wish I knew all the tales they could tell..Life was so much more simple and better.. You all come again..Thanks..
ReplyDeleteThe barn loft! Oh how well I remember playing in the loft, jumping out of it, and then in the crib where we had a playhouse. Kids today just don't know what they're missing do they?
ReplyDeleteHi Susie, I just love this poem! I never grew up around barns living in the city, but they always held a fascination for me!. How happy I was when we came to Georgia and moved into an area where there are so many farms and barns to see as I travel along the road.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you wrote the poem from the barn's perspective. You have such a gift of empathy! It just shines through your poems, a wonderful ability to feel what another person is feeling. It makes your poems come alive! I just wanted to press my cheek against the old wood planks and tell the barn that it was still needed and would not be forgotten! :) I hope you have a lovely evening ahead! Delisa :)
How true. I love old barns and the memories they hold.
ReplyDeleteThanks Charlotte, I bet you had a great time jumping out of that hayloft. We had a barn but it wasn't big enough for a loft. The kids today are not as creative as we were and they find it hard to play outside even. We made playhouses too. What fun.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Delisa, you are so sweet. There's something about writing (I know that you already know this)that puts you into the heart and soul of the subject. I love Old History and the things that came with it. It energizes me, so to speak. Blessings, Susie
Looks a lot like the one I remember from my grandparents farm so many years ago. Barns will always hold a special, loved spot in my heart.
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Wonderful!! I hate to see them in ruins.
ReplyDeleteWe call them sheds over here and I used to play in one as a child also.. Loved the smell of animal grains, old bags, scales and machinery.
Thank you both so much. @Muddling Through, blogger is messed up for me, I can only post comments if I uncheck th esin in box.. So Sorry.
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal Mary, they were a fun place to play. If those barns could only talk..
Lovely poem and the picture reminds of an old barn I pass when going to church.
ReplyDeleteThank you Wanda and thanks for the visit..
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely barn and a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the comments and visit..
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