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Sunday, August 28, 2011
Nothing But A Name
Her name was Ida Bee
a lonely orphan girl
needing someone to care
in a lonely, forsaken world
With nothing but a name
to call her own
she had always longed
for the comforts of a home
Someone to play with
or a mom and dad
her heart laid heavy
for things she never had
That awful foster home
she'd lived as a child
the scars a constant reminder
the beatings weren't mild
She'd ate from the garbage
slept on the ground
in her young twelve years
she'd never heard a sound
She wanted to go to school
learn more than her name
play with other children
and every childhood game
Why was she so different
she didn't quite understand
Ida Bee, Ida Bee
she wrote in the sand
Her tears kept falling
desperation continued to grow
then she saw an old lady
in her garden with a hoe
Just a happy old lady
with plenty of love to give
a heart of pure gold
and a home to live
She happily pitched in
and together they grew
the most beautiful garden
this world ever knew
© Susie Swanson, 2019
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What a touching piece, Susie ~ simple lovely, written by a Beautiful Heart ~
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Oh my, that started out pretty sad. I'm glad there was a happy ending. Nicely done, Susie.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helena, so glad you liked it..
ReplyDeleteThank you Daisy, glad you liked it too. I couldn't leave her so sad. I had to find a happy ending or cry myself..Susie
Oh Susie this is so touching, wonderfully written.
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The beginning was sad; did she end up living with the old woman? Hope so, then they could both be happy!
ReplyDeleteThank you both so much, glad you enjoyed it. @lil red hen Yes she did live with her, the last verse describes that.. thank you again..Susie
ReplyDeleteSo sad, but I loved the happy ending.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem, Susie~ such a sad little story but with a happy ending!
ReplyDeleteSusie! Wow I loved this one. I wish all the kids like her could end up the way she did. You are so very talented.
ReplyDeleteThank you Paula and Tipper, I cherish every word and comment. Tipper I really don't know about talent afte reading so many wonderful , talented posts.. Thanks Again, Susie
ReplyDeleteHi Susie! Oh, I love this poem, it is so visual and it takes the reader to so many different places and through so many emotions. I loved the ending! It was so uplifting and really shows how little acts of kindness can heal so much! Have a great evening ahead! Delisa :)
ReplyDeleteSusie my friend, you are a wonderful talent... this poem is beautifully penned, as are all of your writes !!
ReplyDeleteLove you girl !
JL
Susie,
ReplyDeleteWhat a heart-warming poem. It really touched me. Great poem.
Thank you Delisa glad you liked it.I had to add a happy ending or cry..
ReplyDeleteThank you JL, you will give me the big head if you're not careful. Nothing compared to your writes..
Thank you Brenda, coming from a great writer as yourself that means so much..Blessings, Susie