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Friday, July 8, 2011
The Most Aged
They are a timeless treasure
sitting in an old rocking chair
no amount of time can measure
the silver, gray in their hair
Much knowledge fills their soul
and flows from the most wise
worth more than mountains of gold
shining through crystal, clear eyes
With a face that's wrinkled and worn
joy still finds room to abide
for lost years they've never mourned
and happiness still sits by their side
Their thoughts are never at end
to a time long since past
time has become their friend
with much prayer it will surely last
Burdens they have carried long
in life they continue to steer
embracing the world with a song
refusing to make room for fear
They've known hardships in life
and worked their hands to the bone
no stranger to struggles and strife
just thankful for the light of dawn
Advice may be to much for some
and floats like the weight of a feather
it should be taken as fast as it comes
and hand and hand walk together
Twice a child and once a man
that's how the saying goes
the most aged are priceless and grand
the heart of a child surely grows
When the curtain of time does fall
as the body grows weary and tired
the empty chair will be left for all
and the path to follow will be hard
Susie Swanson Published, 2010
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What a beautiful poem. Makes me think of my grandparents now long passed away and the knowledge they passed on to me, the stories and their never ending love.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, I know what you mean. I have so many memories myself..Susie
ReplyDeleteHi Susie, your poem today is so beautiful and deeply meaningful. A few years ago my friend Vicki and I taught a Bible class at out local nursing home once a week. I had the opportunity to meet some truly wonderful people and I will never forget our happy times together and the quiet strength and dignity they showed. The line in your poem about how they have seen struggles and strife and yet only want to see the light of dawn is so profound. That describes it exactly. Getting to know these priceless older ones, taught me to look at life differently, to worry less about success or failure and to value "endurance". Their endurance showed me what it means to be truly faithful. Have a lovely evening ahead! Delisa :)
ReplyDeleteSusie WOW! THis fits so many fo my grand people I work with every week. Oh I think you have the heart of each one in this peom. You are such an awesome writer. Love this.
ReplyDeleteBlessings
Could I might take this and copy it to take to work and share?
Let me know. Thanks
A poem for eternal wisdom, love and experience. Life's masters!! great Susie.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem , I am not THAT old but getting along that way, I found this really a pleasure to read. I wonder why my son has turned against me and am being deprived of seeing his three children, why he tore his sons' birthday card I sent to him. Life sure is strange but I do have some wonderful memories of life through my family and travels.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely week-end.
Yvonne.
A beautiful tribute, Susie. I like the line that speaks of embracing the world with a song ... It paints a nice picture, our song being our outlook, perspective, attitude, that we bring to every day.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Susie. A lovely salute to those who have gone before us.
ReplyDeleteTo each and everyone thanks so much for the wonderful comments. I cherish every word and comment. It means so much to me. Glad you all enjoyed it. Yes Beth you can copy it and share, let me know if they like it...Love you all..Susie
ReplyDeleteSusie,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very touching poem. It reminds me of my granddaddy who used to sit in the rocking chair. You've done a great job writing this poem.
Words well written for us. I really understand the phrase, "twice a child, once a man." I'm getting there :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Brenda coming from a wonderful writer like you that means a lot.
ReplyDeleteThank you lil red hen, glad you enjoyed it. We all are getting there, some a little faster than others..lol. Susie
Susie I am copying and will be taking it to work with me. Im hoping they will put it on their little board. I will see.
ReplyDeleteIt is so beautiful!
Thank you for allowing me this wonderful gift to share.
Blessings
Thank you Beth..
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem about our elders : )
ReplyDeleteThank you Tipper..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Susie. It makes me think of my dad who is almost 87 years old. He has been without my mom since 1996. He still smiles and has a twinkle in his small eyes.
ReplyDeleteThank you Janet, I know what you mean, I wrote it with my mom and dad in mind..
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