A brave and determined soldier
in a lonely, distant land
with his gear on his back
and his weapon in his hand
He follows his instincts
although the elements are rough
with a hunger in his stomach
he's grown patient and tough
He knows his job well
and does it best as he can
he hasn't slept in quite a while
sleep's not part of the plan
His mind wanders back
to his home faraway
those beautiful, smiling faces
are the highlight of his day
That sweet little baby
he hasn't even seen it yet
he longs to hold it so
and knows its grown quite a bit
Then back to work he goes
with war there's no end
he'll hold on to his thoughts
until he sees them again
The determination in his heart
has become mighty strong
to fight for what he believes in
and everything he's known
The price for freedom
he's willing to give his all
in the eyes of his country
he's a man quite tall
His reason for being there
the old red, white and blue
and that makes him a soldier
through and through
Susie Swanson Published April 2010
Very nice job with this Susie. Excellent tribute, and it portrays the life of a soldier well.
ReplyDeleteThis really touched me, Susie, as I lost my father in WWII when I was 3 months old. Nice writing.
ReplyDeleteExcellent tribute, very tastefully written.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
"That makes him a soldier through and through", This poignant piece really touched me. Imagine the plight of a young man, serving his country and there at his home, his new born yearning to be in his arms. How his spouse must feel- sad as he is away or proud of the very fact that he is fighting for the nation. A difficult thought indeed.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful post thanking such bold men. Hats off to you ma'am.
Wonderful Tribute Susie...I wish they could all read this.
ReplyDeleteVery well done. A wonderful tribute.
ReplyDeleteLovely tribute Susie.
ReplyDeleteSuch a poignant tribute .... lovely.
ReplyDeletePS - did you make those quilts I see to the right - Gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThank you all so much. I'm trying to pop over to each blog with a thank you now. Thanks to my good friend Helena.. I always wandered if anyone really came back to find a thank you.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful tribute, Susie... Your poems are fabulous. We don't EVER want to forget those men and women in the armed services who have done and are doing so much to protect us and give us the freedom we love. Thanks so much!!!
ReplyDeleteHugs,
Betsy
A moving tribute, it's nice to get inside the soldier's thoughts in your verses. To see his family and to know that in some way, seeing them again helps to keep him going.
ReplyDeleteHi Susie, what a moving and heartfelt poem. You have a real knack for being able to empathize with someone and feel what it must be like to walk in their shoes. It was the same when you wrote the poem a couple of months ago about the homeless man. They live lives, very different from your own yet you are able to reach in, and imagine what they feel and touch the very human emotions that we all share in common. I hope you have a lovely evening ahead. Delisa :)
ReplyDeleteSusies,
ReplyDeleteThis is a touching poem. My nephew served two tours of duty in Iraq and my brother is a Vietnam vet. Glad you shared this poem with us.
Love it Susie !
ReplyDeleteNice post! Love it!
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