Faraway from the turmoil of this world
there's a little house sitting on a hillside
I want to go back to that childhood home
where faith, hope and love chose to abide
I can see the chimney smoke rising above
oh the happiness packed in that humble abode
A welcome warmth from today's stress and strife
where unity came together and love growed
I can hear the barking of that old squirrel dog
upon that little hill he's treed him a squirrel
It brings a world of comfort to hear it again
an escape and refuge for this weary, country girl
And the rooster crowing at the break of dawn
still awakens my heart with a morning song
A little, sleepy-eyed girl with a smiling, freckled face
still knows exactly where she'll always belong
There's so much beauty to be seen in my eyes
like that pretty laurel hanging by the road
There's nothing more refreshing to my bare feet
then the little branch where the cool water flowed
On those beautiful, sunny slopes and golden hills
is where I spent my growing years so carefree
I want to go back to that wonderful, old place
where the living was good and life seemed so easy
I have never known but joy in going back home
in a changing world, only memories are made to last
How I long to step upon that old, creaky porch
then my homesick heart will cry, home, home at last
© Susie Swanson, 2013
Such a beautiful poem of home...I wish I had such fond memories of mine.
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DeleteSusie, this just took me back to the little gray house I grew up in: only three small rooms, pot-bellied stove, hot air in the summer and cold air in the winter. We played in the branch and on the hillside rocks. The old house is gone, but I too would love to step upon the porch. I don't feel like I can ever cry, " home, home at last", until I reach my heavenly home.
ReplyDeleteYou are so good at bringing memories to mind!
Thank you Charlotte. It's just wishful thinking on my part as well. My old homeplace is gone now too. We all have our own memories.
DeleteSusie you really captured those sweet memories of your long ago home well in this poem. I hope you have a wonderful week ahead.
ReplyDeleteAwww, thank you so much Daisy.
DeleteOh, Susie, there are places in my heart, too, that I'd love to revisit. But without those dear souls who have gone on, it just wouldn't be the same. I love this one!
ReplyDeleteThank you Elaine and you are so right. I thought about that while I was writing this..
DeleteSusie, I want to go back to that wonderful, old place too. This poem hit home for me today because lately I've been missing my mom and the special house that I was raised in. Sometimes I will drive through the old neighborhood because I still have an aunt and uncle on the same block, and it brings back so many wonderful memories for me. From one hometown girl to another, your poem was so special for me today.
ReplyDeleteLove,
~Sheri
Thank you Sheri. I know what you mean, sometimes it's more hard, especially at certain times of the year. I want to go back too.
DeleteThis was sure sweet to read. I love that picture of the cozy cabin too.
ReplyDeleteYou would probably love the sound of my dog Buddy (coon hound mix) when he sings...He loves to sing and loves to tree squirrels too!
~Blessings and love~ Lisa
Thank you Lisa. I would love to hear your dog so much. Blessings to you.
DeleteSusie, With your southern up bringing, I read words you use that my mother used to say...like branch(water) . We would probably call every bit of water streams , creeks.. I have really been enjoying my book of your poetry. xoxo,Susie
ReplyDeleteAww, thank you Susie and I'm so glad you're enjoying the book. xoxoxo
DeleteLovely poem...the picture and words are perfect compliments for each other. This poem actually makes me think of our cabin life here, and how special it is...I'm hoping some day my daughters and grandson have similar fond memories of it like in your poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your kind words on my blog, I'm looking forward to writing my book...I may be looking to you for some guidance/advance, being that you are a successfully published author:)
Thank you Lise. I'm so happy you've decided to do your book. I don't know what I could give but will be willing to try. i couldn't have done it myself if not for help.. Thanks again..
ReplyDeleteI felt like I was right there beside you Susie what a beauty this one is. But all of your writing is so heart felt and inspiring love reading them. Thank you! Keep writing and I will keep reading. LOve them and you!!! Blessings
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