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Tuesday, April 3, 2012
Twenty Five Long Years
She sat so all alone
on her porch upon a hill
the rocking started at dawn
in the early morning chill
Each day became the same
as her yesterdays did grow
her tears fell like rain
her hair white as snow
So much time had passed
since the day he went away
but wars continue to last
and mothers continue to pray
Separted by an ocean
each day she longed even more
to see her smiling son
walk through her front door
Each night when she went to bed
she left a candle bright
a flame in the window red
to guide him home at night
But no one did appear
upon her doorsteps there
she laid her worries and fear
upon God's shoulders in prayer
Today the rocking chair is empty
no candle can be found
just the wind blowing peacefully
with leaves covering the ground
The son she so yearned for
she's now crying joyful tears
he'd been waiting on another shore
for twenty five long years
Susie Swanson, 2012
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So touching - and true for so many mothers, now and then, whose sons (and daughters) make the ultimate sacrifice.
ReplyDeleteThank you Glenda, yes it is..
ReplyDeleteSo sad, so true, but ultimately - so joyous. Bless you, Susie.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gorges, this happened to a lady I knew..She's rejoicing now..
ReplyDeleteThat's a good one, Susie, and isn't it sad that we sacrifice our best and bravest? Sometimes it's for a good cause, but other times, I wonder.
ReplyDeleteIt sure is, and thank you so much.
DeleteWonderful Susie, I too am waiting for a son but he is only thirty miles away and disowned me last year.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
Oh I'm so sorry to hear that Yvonne..I will be praying that everything works out for you..
DeleteGood, and yes sad too.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tracy.
DeleteOh my, what a moving poem, Susie! Well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Daisy..
ReplyDeleteA sad and moving depiction of so much of her life, waiting to be reunited with her child. Life takes so many unexpected turns, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteIt sure does, thank you Joanne.
Deleteoh my goodness Susie, how heart wrenching! Oh my I want to hug the woman...the third stanza was gorgeous and painted a realisic photo in my mind...great work!
ReplyDeleteSo very touching, Susie.
ReplyDeleteThank you, glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteOh that is so beautiful and also so sad. Blessings to you my friend..your heart is so lovely. xxxxxxxxxxxx
ReplyDeleteThank you Crystal, you're a great inspiration my friend..
DeleteHi Susie, this is one of the most heartfelt and beautiful poems I have ever read. It is so tender. I love the ending. It really shows the importance of holding on to love and faith no matter what. Staying loyal to the memory of our loved ones keeps them always alive in our heart and helps us to appreciate even more those that are still here with us. Have a wonderful weekend ahead Susie! Delisa :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Delisa, that means a lot. Yes those memories are what keeps us going..Hope you have a nice weekend too.
DeleteSusie, Your poetry is wonderful. I love this peom today. Almost made me cry though. Happy Easter you and yours. Smiles, Susie(She Junks)
ReplyDeleteThank you Susie, so sorry it made you cry..thank you for the sweet words.Happy Easter to you.
DeleteOh Susie I liked this one. It reminds me of some of the old war songs Pap and Paul sing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tipper, glad you can relate.
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